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Fergar
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Ignoring him
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: It ruins dialogues by making them less believable
    Status: Denied

My name is Fergar, I lived in a border village in a land very far from here, I had had a happy childhood until a certain Jurvard, a raider, razed the village to the ground and took me and my family as slaves. I spent months serving the raiders until the day Jurvard, while trying to molest my mother, killed her for talking back to her. At that moment my father, in chains, reacted by trying to attack him but the guards beheaded him immediately. I was terrified and didn't move a muscle, Jurvard took me and dragged me towards the bodies of my parents and said to me: "If you try to rebel, you will end up like them, remember that little one, it would be a shame, I could use someone to clean our shoes like you do". From that day something changed inside me, a burning feeling that consumed me, not even allowing me to utter a word. It was at that moment that a slave named Garlfinnr, after seeing the scene, decided to try to help me escape by risking his own life, without my knowledge. In fact, one night he managed to start a fire in Jurvard's hut, the fire spread and chaos broke out, but unfortunately he was caught shortly after, Garlfinnr turned towards me and shouted "Now run away!" I remained still for a few seconds, not believing it was really the end of that nightmare, I started running as hard as I could until I lost consciousness. When I woke up it was dawn, I got up and started trying to orient myself, and then started wandering in search of a village where I could be welcomed. Twelve years have passed and I am a mercenary after having learned to survive in the ghettos of the worst cities, I have hunted down all the members of Jurvard's gang, I have the last names left on the list and he is the final one.


Character Name: Fergar
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 26
Physical Description: Slender boy, grim look, brown hair and eyes. He is very quiet, working doing some mercenary contracts around.
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

 

Please review our Wiki’s definition of Powergaming. Including an example if you're having a hard time writing something down/or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

 

Please review our Wiki’s definition of Metagaming. Including an example if you're having a hard time writing something down/or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

 

Please provide a valid Java minecraft username! You should be able to find it by going into a single player world by hitting tab or typing in chat!

 

Your skin isn’t server appropriate. Might we be able to interest you in a skin from our skin archive? 

https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive

 

 

Hello there! It looks like you left the original prompt, please make sure to put your own story down and remove the example text! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about parents? Ect.

 

 

Please make sure to mark out what your character is saying with quotation marks, or make sure to make out your actions however you see fit!  

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

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