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• Please try and correct the Spelling & Grammar across your application to the best of your ability! It doesn't need to be perfect but at the moment it hinders your application and makes it difficult to understand.
• Your Powergaming and Metagaming definitions are correct in essence but vague and lacking in detail. Please expand on these and add an example as well – make sure to add the definition of power-emoting into your powergaming definition too. You can refer to our wiki page on metagaming and powergaming for the server’s accepted definitions, just keep in mind that plagiarism is not tolerated.
• Your character’s Background is too short and doesn’t give enough detail about your character’s past. Please extend this to at least two decent sized paragraphs. You could include more information on things such as your character’s place of birth, upbringing, family, profession and any other important events that have happened to them.
• You must include at least two valid server Lore References in your character biography (other than your character’s race, family, a date or one of the server’s maps). This lore reference could be something like the name of the city your character was born in, the religion they follow or an event such as a war that your character has lived through. Please fix this using the LotC Wiki.
• The character Description field should be used to describe the physical attributes of your character, such as their build/stature, eye colour, hair colour and any other distinguishing features.
• Your character’s interesting Facts & Traits must be written as full sentences of at least five words.
• You must include at least one clear Flaw in your character’s interesting facts/traits. A flaw is generally something to do with a character’s personality/behaviour.
• While this is not at all necessary to change, I wanted to make sure that you’re aware your character’s age will mean that they will be considered something like a child or adolescent in most elven cultures. Generally speaking, elves aren’t considered adults until they reach at least 50 years of age.

You have 24 hours to make the edits above. Shoot me a message either here on the forums or on discord (my account is Aqua#5363) once you’ve edited your application. 

Please don’t hesitate to contact me or another Community Team member if you need help or have any questions whatsoever. You can also issue the /creq command on the server to place a ticket should you require assistance.

Feel free to join our New Player Discord! You’ll also find the LotC Wiki helpful when searching for information on the server’s lore.

You have failed to make the required changes within 24 hours.

Please make the changes below in your next application.

• Please try and correct the Spelling & Grammar across your application to the best of your ability! It doesn't need to be perfect but at the moment it hinders your application and makes it difficult to understand.
• Your Powergaming and Metagaming definitions are correct in essence but vague and lacking in detail. Please expand on these and add an example as well – make sure to add the definition of power-emoting into your powergaming definition too. You can refer to our wiki page on metagaming and powergaming for the server’s accepted definitions, just keep in mind that plagiarism is not tolerated.
• Your character’s Background is too short and doesn’t give enough detail about your character’s past. Please extend this to at least two decent sized paragraphs. You could include more information on things such as your character’s place of birth, upbringing, family, profession and any other important events that have happened to them.
• You must include at least two valid server Lore References in your character biography (other than your character’s race, family, a date or one of the server’s maps). This lore reference could be something like the name of the city your character was born in, the religion they follow or an event such as a war that your character has lived through. Please fix this using the LotC Wiki.
• The character Description field should be used to describe the physical attributes of your character, such as their build/stature, eye colour, hair colour and any other distinguishing features. 
• Your character’s interesting Facts & Traits must be written as full sentences of at least five words.
• You must include at least one clear Flaw in your character’s interesting facts/traits. A flaw is generally something to do with a character’s personality/behaviour. 
• While this is not at all necessary to change, I wanted to make sure that you’re aware your character’s age will mean that they will be considered something like a child or adolescent in most elven cultures. Generally speaking, elves aren’t considered adults until they reach at least 50 years of age.

Please don’t hesitate to contact me or another Community Team member if you need help or have any questions whatsoever, my discord is Aqua#5363. You can also issue the /creq command on the server to place a ticket should you require assistance.

Feel free to join our New Player Discord! You’ll also find the LotC Wiki helpful when searching for information on the server’s lore.

You may reapply at any time.