Bielzinnxz

Your application has unfortunately been DENIED at this time due to reasons listed below. Please read through them, and make the appropriate changes before applying again.

Definitions: Your definitions are both incorrect. Please research online for each term, and give a brief explanation as to what they are, and how they work.

Backstory: You need to include a backstory with your application for your character, detailing events that has helped them into becoming the person they are today (e.g: childhood, adolescence, traumatic experiences). Try and include at least 6 sentences.

Character Name: Your character name isn't meant to be your Minecraft name. Choose something unique, as it will be the name of the individual you will be roleplaying as on our server.

Minecraft Skin/Physical Description: The Minecraft Skin you have applied with isn't suitable with our server's themes., please choose another. Detail your character's physical appearance - her height, weight, hair colour/style, eyes and anything that is significant or noteworthy. Make sure it matches the Minecraft skin you provide as well.

Feel free to use a skin off our archives:

https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive/elf-skins?authuser=0

Personality Traits/Quirks: You have failed to answer this field properly. Some advice on how to handle this section is to make sure your character's personality traits/quirks somehow line up to their past. Maybe a traumatic experience in their past has left them with PTSD, and makes their hand twitch every once and a while? Make sure to also give your character some flaws.

What does your character want to achieve? What drives them?: Please work on adding more to your answer. For your next attempt, some advice would be to make your character's achievements somehow tie in with your background. Be creative, but make sure they work for your character.

What is your character's biggest fear? What caused them to develop this fear?: Please elaborate on this. Make your character's fear tie into their backstory, make it unique and interesting - it doesn't have to be anything over the top.

Roleplay Scenario: Your roleplay scenario needs to be filled out. Please put effort into it, and add a combination of both dialogue and actions from your character. The more detail, the better.

- Have your roleplay scenario be AT LEAST four sentences long.

- Include at least one dialogue surrounded by quotes.

- At least one action, where your character is doing something physical.

- Make sure your roleplay scenario doesn't have any metagaming, or powergaming in it.

- Do not include any personal thoughts into your emote. Emotes should be physical, and something that other people would be able to see/feel/hear.

- Make sure you write it out in third person.

Feel free to re-apply at any time after this denial, just make sure you make the changes with the aforementioned things. Don't be disheartened, and don't give up - if things are too hard, feel free to reach out to me either the Forums via a PM, or contact me directly on my Discord: D A N N Y#2022.