Bielzinnxz

Your application has unfortunately been DENIED at this time due to reasons listed below, please make sure to fix all addressed problems before reapplying:

Important: Please remember that you are applying for a character - use third-person language, as it is not an application for yourself. Additionally, please double-check your work for grammatical/spelling errors.
 

Definitions: Both definitions are incorrect. Please research these roleplay terms, and write an answer with your own words describing what they are.

Backstory: Your character's backstory is far too limited in detail, and is written in first-person.. Please take the time to properly fill this out, including significant events such as your character's childhood, adolescence and their current life. Feel free to include any events that may have significantly impacted them, an example being the loss of a loved one. Try and aim for at least 6 sentences long.

Physical Description: Please work on your character's description, make it a little more in-depth.

Roleplay Scenario: Your roleplay scenario needs serious work as well. Treat it like a normal roleplay interaction, and keep it simple if you find it difficult. It's just a way for us to determine your roleplay quality, and make sure it meets our server's standards. In your next roleplay scenario, please include the following:

- Have your roleplay scenario be AT LEAST four sentences long.

- Include at least one dialogue surrounded by quotes.

- At least one action, where your character is doing something physical.

- Make sure your roleplay scenario doesn't have any metagaming, or powergaming in it.

- Do not include any personal thoughts into your emote. Emotes should be physical, and something that other people would be able to see/feel/hear.

- Make sure you write it out in third person.

Feel free to re-apply at any time after this denial, just make sure you make the changes with the aforementioned things. Don't be disheartened, and don't give up - if things are too hard, feel free to reach out to me either the Forums via a PM, or contact me directly on my Discord: D A N N Y#2022.

Best of luck, I hope to see you on the server soon.