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Abbas

By Abbas

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    Discord: ANIME COOL#5664
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: metagaming is also known as role playing
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: another term for role playing
    Status: Denied

' eyes opened wide' i would say to the well dressed gentlman why hello thank you for the warm welcome. Well the reason i can is to hopefully start a family. I also wish to go on a big adventure and explore. I do not need money when i have food and shelter. 

Character Name: Abbas
Character Race: Orc
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Strong
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!
  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I suggest adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good. 
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks must include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think about topics such as how they react around new people, or how they view others around them!
  • Your Character Like is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's like connects with their biography!
  • Your Character Fear is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!
  • Your Character Dislike is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's dislike connects with their biography!
  • Your Character Fear, Like, and Dislike must be two sentences 
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!
  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @Chronics#7490, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

 

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