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BigLadRadix
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    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: bigladradix
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: I avoid powergaming by setting the abilities/strengths of my character to what they would realistically be in a fantasy world, ie. no magic, no godlike strength, essentially nothing that does not fit with my character, and/or makes it unfair for fellow members.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Because acting upon information that your character should not know, whilst in character creates an environment and/or situation that should not have occurred, and also ruins the fun of plans of someone else or a group of people.
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


"It smells like home, but why would I tell you my story when I could eat you, you look very weak and defenceless right now, what would stop me? I won't though. I am just making my way back to my village. Although now that I think about it, you do look rather delicious, and I could get a pretty penny for your bones.."


Character Name: Gnabadug
Character Race: Orc
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: 6'8, red skin, dark hair, green eyes, long tusk teeth, white button up shirt, dark pants, belt with gold buckle
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!


 

-Please make sure to include at least six sentences! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.
 

-Please remember to include backstory in the Back story & Roleplay Scenario! Even if your persona doesn’t talk about it
 

-Please make sure to use actions in your backstory/roleplay scenario. This is just to ensure we know what you are doing!

When talking about your character’s actions! Remember to use 3rd person!

-Your skin and Physical Description are too modern, feel free to use or take inspiration from our Skin Archive



Please make these changes within 48 hours!
Once you have made the changes, message me on Discord @mockingbirdart or on the forums @MockingbirdArt

Feel free to reach out if you need help!

 

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.


Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.

 

-Please make sure to include at least six sentences! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.
 

-Please remember to include backstory in the Back story & Roleplay Scenario! Even if your persona doesn’t talk about it
 

-Please make sure to use actions in your backstory/roleplay scenario. This is just to ensure we know what you are doing!

When talking about your character’s actions! Remember to use 3rd person!

-Your skin and Physical Description are too modern, feel free to use or take inspiration from our Skin Archive



If you need help or have any questions, feel free to message me on Discord @mockingbirdart or the forums @MockingbirdArt

 

I recommend joining LOTC's Discord, here is the link! Discord

 

Go to the New Player's category, and go to help chat. Ping @Community team saying "Hello, I got denied, can someone help me with my new application? I'd like to try again!"

 

Here are some Links to also help you out!
 

WIKI

New Player Hub.

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