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Blue_Ninja25

Blue_Ninja25

By Blue_Ninja25

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Youtube
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Using IRL knowledge in a roleplaying game
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Interactions between people in a roleplaying game
    Status: Denied

"Good morning my lord" I pull out my pocket watch and look down. 5 pass 7, the day is still young and I'm one step closer to achieving my goal. "Adventuring never hurt anyone" I replied and he nodded. I tell him of my dream to own my own estate and he guides me to the tavern for more information to obtain a job for the local tavern keep and he leaves. Maybe I'll see him again once I've accomplished my goal to reward him for the help. 

Character Name: Blue_Ninja25
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: A successful merchant with silks and tokens from all over the land. Messy set of hair with dirty face
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Changed Status to Under Review

 

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?
  • Please state whether you have roleplayed before or not!

  • Your Physical Description needs to be purely physical! Don’t include anything personality-wise in there. 

  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

  • Your fears must be at least 2 sentences long and contain a reason.

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response must be in third person.

 

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [ Rin is Alive#0001 ]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message RinIsSalty to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

 

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