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BomBook

By BomBook

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: TikTok
    Discord: BomBook #4200
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: I would tell them to stop and that my character can’t do that and if they don’t listen then I would ask admin for help.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Meta gaming ruins it because it’s something that character should not know unless they either find out by accident or they never find out cause unless it’s something that your character wouldn’t do you shouldn’t add it since you know your own character
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))

Ah, well I’m escaping from an old kingdom my father rules over… my reason is because I fell for the leader of the rebellion, her and her people were in slaved thus leading the rebellion but… she and my father passed after their battle… I mean none of any trouble I just wish for a place to spend the night and have a meal then I shall leave in the morning…

Character Name: Blanc
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 22
Physical Description: Has a bit of a lean built to him, his eyes are black,
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Changed Status to Under Review

Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

- Please make sure to include at least six sentences! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.

-Your Physical Description doesn’t match the race you picked! here is the correct race infomation!  No black eyes.

- Your Roleplay Scenario & Backstory states that you are royalty, please remember you’ve been a background character up until this point. Once accepted, You’ll be the main character in your own story. 

- Please redo your powergaming question as it is for exactly what yourself would do to avoid committing powergaming not what to do when you come across it.

- Please remember to add dialogue of your character actions! This is to ensure we know what you are doing! 

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is Smol_Bean~#2377! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

- Please make sure to include at least six sentences! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.

-Your Physical Description doesn’t match the race you picked! here is the correct race infomation!  No black eyes.

- Your Roleplay Scenario & Backstory states that you are royalty, please remember you’ve been a background character up until this point. Once accepted, You’ll be the main character in your own story. 

- Please redo your powergaming question as it is for exactly what yourself would do to avoid committing powergaming not what to do when you come across it.

- Please remember to add dialogue of your character actions! This is to ensure we know what you are doing! 

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is Smol_bean~#2377! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. 

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

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