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Bord0x

By Bord0x

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    Discord: Bordox#8139
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: game information outside of what is available in the game is used to give a plyaer an advantage in the game
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: maximise ur prog to something specific in a game
    Status: Denied

You’ve just stepped off of the boat in the port of a massive and fortified city. Before you lies a sprawling bazaar, with numerous shops, stalls, and seated traders selling wares to folk of all walks of life. Just as you’re about to continue walking onwards, into the market, you’re approached by a well-dressed gentleman who looks upon you with a big smile. “Welcome!” He began. “What brings you to this lovely city? Adventure? Wealth? Or some grand aspirations to elevate your place in society?”
How do you respond?

” Doesn't say a word and walks past barging the guy out the way” (Doesn't talk)

Character Name: Bordox
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: Light gray hair, Multiple scars, Average build, scarlet-colored eyes which are normally covered by his bangs
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Amelica

Changed Status to Under Review

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to it having too many errors, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

 

  • Your Metagaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!
  • Your Powergaming Definition is incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definition and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help ❤️
  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?
  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be existing settlements, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
  • Your Physical Description states that your character has scarlet eyes, which is inconsistent with his race. Please fix accordingly.
  • Your Physical Description states that your character has light grey hair, which is impossible since he a 19-year-old human. Please correct this error.
  • Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please fix one!
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 
  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @amelica#8025, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Guide for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/191596-the-new-player-guide/.

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