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    Referral: PC Gamer
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: When a player uses game information outside of what is available in the game for his or her advantage in-game.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: when a player aims at maximising only the useful or powerful traits and and minimising underpowered or useless traits to the extent that it starts to affect the game world and also the experience of other players playing the game.
    Status: Denied

Favian Shawth completely ignores the gentleman as he gets lost in the beauty of the city as he gazes his sight on it.

The gentleman says "It's a beauty, isn't it?".

Favian Shawth suddenly realizes the existence of the gentleman beside him and replies "Yes it's a beauty in itself."

"My name is Favian Shawth." Favian says while extending his arm for a handshake.

The gentleman shakes Favian hands and replies "Richard Toms". Richard asks Favian "If I may ask, what brings you to this lovely city?"

Favian smiles as he replies to Richard "My craze to travel the world has led me to this wonderful city as my next destination."

Richard after hearing Favian says "Traveling always bring wonderful but surprising things with itself along the way."

Before leaving Favian, Richard gives him good luck for his journey.

Character Name: Favian Shawth
Character Race: Heartlander
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: silver-greyish hair color with blue colored eyes, firm but flexible body build with a height of 5'10 inches and 70kg or 154 lbs as weight.
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Changed Status to Under Review

 

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Please state whether you have roleplayed before or not!

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message RinIsSalty! If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at Rin is Alive#0001

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

 

Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed above ♥

 

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [ Rin is Alive#0001 ]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message RinIsSalty to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

 

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