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bubbles5952
  • Rules: Yes
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    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: You word your actions specifically to leave the other player with the ability to make their own decision in their response.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: When roleplaying you aren't you, and they aren't themselves. It's unfair to bring the real world into roleplaying, that's simply not what it's for. Its disrupts the creative story's flow. If you try to prevent something like the example given it's basically cheating.
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))
 

Her face tightened, unprepared to see another face in the darkness. Her eyes followed the dancing candles, quickly thinking over every possible scenario. "I'm looking for someone who was running in this direction, perhaps you've seen them?" She remembered the knife in her boot, grateful for its's presence. The smell of the tent brought back a memory, distant but ever so clear. The time she killed her cousin. She was graced with the ability to kill, or so everyone thought. She was raised in a respected family, with a normal life and friends. Her cousin was the monster everyone adored. He constantly abused her, in anyway you can think of. One day, she snapped his neck when he got too close, she was only nine years old. She was place in a tent by herself so the others could make a decision on what to do with her, that's what this smell was. She was shunned, forced to become independent, believing this power makes her the monster. The only one who paid her attention was her uncle, who used her for her ability. Doing jobs for others in exchange for her life is all she's known, though she acts as a Robin Hood to the needy in the towns she has to travel to, in an attempt to gain part of her life back.


Character Name: Lady Katsa
Character Race: Highlander
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: 4'3, 100 pounds, brown hair, one green and one blue eye with an outfit fit for stealth and travel.
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Changed Status to Under Review

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

  • Please include more backstory in the Back story & Roleplay Scenario! Even if your persona doesn’t talk about it
  • Your Backstory states that your character has power, You will be able to have power once you are accepted onto the server! If you have any questions please let me know!

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is Anime_Wolf0080! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums @AnimeWolf0080!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “I’m new and would like some help with my application. I got put on pending!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

Your backstory had things that goes against our TOS please read the rules!

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Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

My discord is Anime_Wolf0080! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums @AnimeWolf0080

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “Hello, I got denied, can someone help me with my new application! I’d like to try again!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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