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Bushamper

By Bushamper

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    Discord: bushamper#4485
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: idk man
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: idk man
    Status: Denied

answer shortly. traveling.... then goes away from the big city to watch from a far, he trusts no one. he learns everything he sees and thinks about everything that could happen, he skips the city

Character Name: Bushamper
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: madium tall very strong and heavy looking body like what you would i magine a warriro would be dark hair dark eyes wears an armored suit he found
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KaiserJacobII

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

 

→ Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

 

→ Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

 

→ Your Character Biography states that he was born in England. Real life history isn’t in the Lord of the Craft lore. Please use lore from Lord of the Craft.

 

→ Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I suggest adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good.

 

→ Your Personality Traits/Quirks must be purely personality! Don’t include anything physical in there.

 

→ Your Personality Traits/Quirks must include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a significant fault in their personality.

 

→ Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think about topics such as how they react around new people, or how they view others around them!

 

→ Your Character Goal must include what drives your character towards that goal instead of just the goal itself!

 

→ Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!

 

→ Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

 

https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive/home?authuser=0

 

After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord Kaiser jacob II#1965 If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC  Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX

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