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Celylith


Celylith
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: topg.org
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: I keep to the description of my character and make it fair for everyone
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: It just ruins the fun of roleplay
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?)) 

"Well, i'm a traveling dark elf my mother died at a very young age but she named me Yuki for my pale skin, Yuki means snow in Japanese, my brother and  dad hate me, they say i'm the reason my mother died- I also trust people too much."


Character Name: Yuki
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Long blue hair, heterochromia eyes, long ears, shiny goggles, shiny boots, brown and white shirt, black pants, cute socks,pale skin, and she is 5'5
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Changed Status to Under Review

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

- Please make sure to include at least six sentences! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.

- Your Physical Description needs a bit more detail!  If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good. 

- Your skin isn’t server appropriate as its too modern. Might we be able to interest you in a skin from our skin archive?  https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home

- Please remember to add dialogue of your character actions! This is to ensure we know what you are doing! 

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is smol_bean ! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

- Please make sure to include at least six sentences! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.

- Your Physical Description needs a bit more detail!  If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good. 

- Your skin isn’t server appropriate as its too modern. Might we be able to interest you in a skin from our skin archive?  https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home

- Please remember to add dialogue of your character actions! This is to ensure we know what you are doing! 

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is  smol_bean ! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. 

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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