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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: it is known as cheating in games and is normally poor received
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: power gaming is like roleplay like unlocking levels or skills
    Status: Denied

You’ve just stepped off of the boat in the port of a massive and fortified city. Before you lies a sprawling bazaar, with numerous shops, stalls, and seated traders selling wares to folk of all walks of life. Just as you’re about to continue walking onwards, into the market, you’re approached by a well-dressed gentleman who looks upon you with a big smile. “Welcome!” He began. “What brings you to this lovely city? Adventure? Wealth? Or some grand aspirations to elevate your place in society?”
How do you respond?
 

Character Name: lacario
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: normal
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to multiple reasons, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

 

  • You must include your Discord in your application.
    Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!
  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory! Think about where they're from, what their parents were like, why they are how they are…?
  • Your Roleplay Definition and Experience must include whether or not you've roleplayed before!
  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I suggest adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good.
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think about topics such as how they react around new people, or how they view others around them!
  • Your Character Goal must include what drives your character towards that goal instead of just the goal itself!
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is the scenario itself, and not an answer to it. Please fix this!


After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @FionnTWG#3845, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite:

Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help:

 

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