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Chochko22
  • Rules: No
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: Chochko22#5037
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: you have to stay in the limit of your character.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: metagaming disturbs fair roleplay by enabling your character to use information that is not learned in the roleplay.
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


Example: 


I'm a young warrior looking for a new adventure in this big world. I'm a loyal warrior I will never betray my conrats But, the problem is I need a loyal team, preferably big. Those are hard to find nowadays, everyone is just for the buck. They'll sell us out for a gold ring and a steak.

Oh my backstory 

I was a little kid and I really wanted to explore the world. But my father used to say that there are also many dangerous and scary creatures in our world. And in order to defeat them, I must become strong and find friends who will not betray me. So I started training and became strong and set off on an adventure to find friends I could count on. And that brings me here.

 


Character Name: Nero Lucullus
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: back hair, blue eyes, white skin, warriors clothing
Screenshot of Skin:



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Changed Status to Under Review

 

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

  • Please review our Wiki’s definition of Powergaming & Metagaming. Including an example if you're having a hard time writing something down/or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 
  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
  • You can also learn more about combat roleplay here
  • https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fIJioVePKYo
  • Your Physical Description needs a bit more detail!  If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, what they might wear, etc. are all good.
  • Please make sure to include at least six sentences! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.
  • Please make sure to mark out what your character is saying with quotation marks, or make sure to make out your actions however you see fit!  
  • Please make sure to use actions in your backstory/roleplay scenario. This is just to ensure we know what you are doing!
  • When talking about your character’s actions! Remember to use 3rd person!
  • Your skin isn’t server appropriate. Might we be able to interest you in a skin from our skin archive? 
  • https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is Anime_Wolf#0080! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums @AnimeWolf0080!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “I’m new and would like some help with my application. I got put on pending!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub
Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

  • Please review our Wiki’s definition of Powergaming & Metagaming. Including an example if you're having a hard time writing something down/or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 
  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
  • You can also learn more about combat roleplay here
  • https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fIJioVePKYo
  • Your Physical Description needs a bit more detail!  If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, what they might wear, etc. are all good.
  • Please make sure to include at least six sentences! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.
  • Please make sure to mark out what your character is saying with quotation marks, or make sure to make out your actions however you see fit!  
  • Please make sure to use actions in your backstory/roleplay scenario. This is just to ensure we know what you are doing!
  • When talking about your character’s actions! Remember to use 3rd person!
  • Your skin isn’t server appropriate. Might we be able to interest you in a skin from our skin archive? 
  • https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

My discord is Anime_Wolf#0080! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums @AnimeWolf0080

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “Hello, I got denied, can someone help me with my new application! I’d like to try again!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

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