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CigarSmokr

By CigarSmokr

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Youtube
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: u cannot act basing on irl information character cant know theese things
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: it is abusing unrealistic powers of roleplaying
    Status: Denied

Greetings, i am on my way to an adventure .

Character Name: Fastred Éomund
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: Fit, tough, young aged fighter with a below average height but pure strenght
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LordScisso

Changed Status to Under Review

 

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Your application has unfourtunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

 

  • Physical description lacks details besides your character being strong.
  • Personality traits lacks weakness.
  • Roleplay Scenario is not 4 sentences and is not structured properly.(https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Roleplaying)
  • I have never encountered a 19 year old with a beard that thick.
  • Also your skin is all on the top layer! I recommend finding a new one, or having one made in the New Player Discord!
  • Your Bio lacks 10 sentences, and 2 lore points.
  • If you plan to reapply, please message me and I can help you through this process.

 

After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord @LordScisso#5640, and I recommend you join the New Player Discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/Zr4EpNa

 

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