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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: Flyingsquirrelthe1st#2137
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Using what you know from a certain time period and using what you know in roleplay format.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Your trying to get a certain outcome from a game
    Status: Denied

Hello! I was traveling with some friends of mine! All three seem great to me. I plan on working my way up bottom to top. I will become a noble and who knows what destiny has in store!

Character Name: Hok Ainsley
Character Race: Goblin
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 21
Physical Description: Blue Goblin who is frail weak and puny but covers that up with aggression
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Amelica

 

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to it having too many errors, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

 

  • Your Metagaming Definition is incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definition and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help ❤️
  • Your Powergaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!
  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be existing settlements, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?
  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good. 
  • Your Physical Description needs to be purely physical! Don’t include anything personality-wise in there. 
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is lacking. It must include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 

 

After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @amelica#8025, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Guide for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/191596-the-new-player-guide/.

 

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