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By Codge

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    Discord: JimmJohnsSupremacy#0003
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Metagaming for me is kind of like eavesdropping. If I was listening to a story someone else was telling, and then out of the blue I just jumped in and began telling and inserting myself into the story, but in game play, that would be what I consider metagaming. :p
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Powergaming is like playing god. when done, other players may not have a say in what is happening in the storyline or to specifically their character.
    Status: Denied

Looking up at the man, I take in his appearance. 'he seems well dressed...royalty? Or rich? Either way...he looks important.' I think. "Why, those are some specific examples sir...I came for the market. I have some item I would like to trade for some goods." 'no need to tell him why I'm really here...he makes me uneasy.'  The man keeps talking, but I've decided I'm done with the conversation. But alas, I cannot leave. no need to make yet another bad first impression. I guess I should fake it. "do you happen to know where I could find a good bite around here? I've been on a boat for months," I accentuate my smile. "I could use something other than fish and bread." Getting the information, I turn to make my much needed exit. Gosh, he was strange...
 

Character Name: Sawyer Jacobs
Character Race: Highlander
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 25
Physical Description: 5'5,long blond hair, monochrome eyes, weighs 200lb mostly muscles. wears frontiersman shirt and tight pants. giant lightning-ish scar on neck + face
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Hi! As you can see, your application has been put on pending, so you're almost ready! There are just a few changes you need to make, but don't worry- you're doing great! 

  • Your Metagaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some! You have one so far, you only need one more!

  • Your Character Biography states that your character has a purple colored scar. While your character can have a scar like the one described and on the skin, it should not be purple as that's not realistic to the server. Please change this! 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response needs some work, but not much! Your response should be written in third person, and it should not include any thoughts (like you have in the first sentence). Please make the proper changes to this! 

  • With the change of your description of the scar being purple, I also ask that you change the color of it on the skin itself!

You will be given 24 hours to correct the needed changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me! 

 

Whenever you are done or have any questions, feel free to contact me via the forums, my discord [ audyush#7358 ], in-game with /message audyush to find me in-game, or you can also use /creq in-game and myself or my fellow CT members can help you that way!

 If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here!

https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

If you still need help, I would recommend that you read over the Wiki!

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Hi! As you can see, your application has unfortunately been denied. Please check below for the detailed reasons why. 

  • Unfortunately, your 24 hour editing period has expired... However, don't fret! You are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change everything that is listed! 

You can submit a new application and try again right after, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below! 

 

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums, my discord [ audyush#7358 ], in-game with /message audyush to find me in-game, or you can also use /creq in-game and myself or my fellow CT members can help you that way!

 

 If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here!

https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

 

Also, I would recommend that you read over the Wiki!

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