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CrackersXx

By CrackersXx

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    Discord: Cracker#0017
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: using info that you as a person know that your charectar should not know
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: doing things that aren't posible such as an orc killing a dragon with wooden sword
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes. i reply with “ i am in search of adventure and wealth” and then hastily continue walking in to the markets and disappearing into the crowd

Character Name: Drekadson
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 68
Physical Description: physical description: 7’1, has silver hair, purple eyes with gray skin,almost always is wearing a old cloak
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MrMineLoveDude

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  • Your definitions are on the right track, but both of them need more clarification!
  • Your character biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be existing settlements, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some! Additionally, your character would not automatically be great at wielding a sword. Please develop this skill once you’re on the server!
  • Your character biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?
  • Your physical description does not match lore. Your character is too tall, dark elves are typically between 5'10" - 6'4" ft, please adjust accordingly!
  • Your roleplay scenario response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. It seems you included the prompt in your response, please delete it!
  • Your skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like. Please refrain from wearing a cloak and/or covering your face!

 

Hey there CrackersXx! Your application is well written and for the most part done well, with the exception of a few but minor mistakes. However, they can be fixed with a couple of tweaks and you’ll be set for being accepted onto the server! With that, you have 24 hours to make the necessary changes needed. Failing to make these changes within the allotted time will return in an automatic denial, though upon request I’ll be able to grant more time for your corrections.

 

When you are finished, please message me on discord @MrMineLoveDude#1404 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord and reading through the New Player Guide as well.

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MrMineLoveDude

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Unfortunately you’ve failed to meet the needed requirements for your application.

 

Your Application has been denied for the following reason(s):

  • Your definitions are on the right track, but both of them need more clarification!
  • Your character biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be existing settlements, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some! Additionally, your character would not automatically be great at wielding a sword. Please develop this skill once you’re on the server!
  • Your character biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?
  • Your physical description does not match lore. Your character is too tall, dark elves are typically between 5'10" - 6'4" ft, please adjust accordingly!
  • Your roleplay scenario response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. It seems you included the prompt in your response, please delete it!
  • Your skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like. Please refrain from wearing a cloak and/or covering your face!

 

Do not fear, this simply means the corrections were not made to the application or were not fully met. After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @MrMineLoveDude#1404, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Guide for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/191596-the-new-player-guide/.

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