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Arsenius
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: The strategy you use during the whole game
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: playing so long where are either finished or almost finished
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Arsenius
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: He was always an outcast a lone wolf .he was the smartest quickest and the strongest. He was unbelievably skilled in weapons.
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Ø  Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are incorrect. Please change these (maybe add examples too), and refer to our LOTC Metagaming & Powergaming wiki pages for the most correct and relevant info (Just keep in mind not to plagiarize)

Ø  Your character’s biography is too short. Please extend this to at least two decent sized paragraphs. You could include things such as your character’s place of birth, upbringing, family, profession and any important events that have happened to them.

 

Ø You must include at least one valid server lore reference in your character biography (other than your character’s race or family, or one of the server’s maps). This lore reference could be something like the name of the city your character was born in or an event such as a war that your character has lived through. Please fix this using the wikia and forums for examples to use.

 

Ø You must include at least one clear flaw in your character's interesting facts/traits.  A flaw should generally be something to do with the character’s personality/behaviour. These facts/traits must be at least five-word sentences.

 

Ø  Your character description should be used to describe the physical attributes of your character such as their hair colour, eye colour and any other distinguishing features. Please edit this.

 

Ø Your skin does not fit the server lore for the appearance of dark elves. Please find another, more appropriate skin. The LoTC Skin Archive on the forum is there for use and for inspiration. I would also recommend checking out the wiki page on dark elves for more information on them.


Ø Your character cannot be unbelievably skilled in weapons as this is too overpowered. Please change this.

 

You’re nearly there however there are a few changes that you must make to your application before you can be whitelisted. You have 24 hours to make the changes above. Once you’ve finished editing your application, shoot me a message here on the forums or through discord and I’ll take another look.

 

You can always check out the server wiki page for an extensive collection of server lore information, as well as the metagaming and powergaming definitions. Feel free to also join our New Player Discord! Here you can ask questions to our Communication Team, meet other players and view up to date roleplay opportunities.

 

If you ever have any questions or need help, please feel free to contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Aqua#5363) or by /msg Aquaquean in-game. You can also /creq on the server to place a ticket if you require assistance from any of us Communication Team members.


 

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You have failed to make the required changes within 24 hours.

 

Please make the changes below in your next application.

 

Ø  Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are incorrect. Please change these (maybe add examples too), and refer to our LOTC Metagaming & Powergaming wiki pages for the most correct and relevant info (Just keep in mind not to plagiarize)

Ø  Your character’s biography is too short. Please extend this to at least two decent sized paragraphs. You could include things such as your character’s place of birth, upbringing, family, profession and any important events that have happened to them.

 

Ø You must include at least one valid server lore reference in your character biography (other than your character’s race or family, or one of the server’s maps). This lore reference could be something like the name of the city your character was born in or an event such as a war that your character has lived through. Please fix this using the wikia and forums for examples to use.

 

Ø You must include at least one clear flaw in your character's interesting facts/traits.  A flaw should generally be something to do with the character’s personality/behaviour. These facts/traits must be at least five-word sentences.

 

Ø  Your character description should be used to describe the physical attributes of your character such as their hair colour, eye colour and any other distinguishing features. Please edit this.

 

Ø Your skin does not fit the server lore for the appearance of dark elves. Please find another, more appropriate skin. The LoTC Skin Archive on the forum is there for use and for inspiration. I would also recommend checking out the wiki page on dark elves for more information on them.


Ø Your character cannot be unbelievably skilled in weapons as this is too overpowered. Please change this.

 

You can always check out the server wiki page for an extensive collection of server lore information, as well as the metagaming and powergaming definitions. Feel free to also join our New Player Discord! Here you can ask questions to our Communication Team, meet other players and view up to date roleplay opportunities.

 

If you ever have any questions or need help, please feel free to contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Aqua#5363) or by /msg Aquaquean in-game. You can also /creq on the server to place a ticket if you require assistance from any of us Communication Team members.


 

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