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CrypticJared

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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    Discord: CrypticJared#7255
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Using knowledge from outside the game to give yourself an advantage against people who actually try to have a fun rp experience.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Pretending you are better than others, and using unrealistic scenarios to your advantage.
    Status: Denied

I am here for wealth and friendship. I seek to become the number 1 blacksmith who will sell weapons and armour to anyone in need.

Character Name: Scrafty
Character Race: Mountain Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 21
Physical Description: Hes 4'8" very muscular with brown hair and green eyes. He always wears heavy duty armour, since hes a weapon and armour smith
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Blake0205

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of quoted dialogue and one action. 


 

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message Blake0205. If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at Blake0205#7006

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here 

https://discord.gg/lotc

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Blake0205

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Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed above

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