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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    Discord: Lunahart#4794
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: when you find someone doing something ooc and then you try to help when you are ic.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: when you don't let people have enough time to respond and you choose the out come. with unrealistic or godly power that can be bad in a rp
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.  When She walk of the boat she looks around the big city *look around*. As she's  looking around she spotted the gentlemen and smile at him so he knows she's  looking at him. she walk over to him and respond with a "thank you for the welcome into your lovely city." When he asks her what she's doing here she answer with "I'm looking for my family because I got taken from them when I was 12". She was a little worried when she told him this though because even if she was 18 she still didn't trust people who she didn't know. After she told him this she was slowly backing up away from the man so she could run if she needed to.

Character Name: Lavi Winters
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: she has white hair and purple eyes she is petite she is slim with a little muscle she weighs 95 lbs and is 5ft 3 and she is wearing a green outfit.
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Hi! As you can see, your application has been put on pending, so you're almost ready! There are just a few changes you need to make, but don't worry- you're doing great! 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Character Biography includes references to things against our server rules. We ask that you please edit out the mention of sexual abuse in your character biography. 

  • Your Physical Description needs to be purely physical! Don’t include anything personality-wise in there. does not match your character's race, please fix this! 4'5 is too short for an elf! Their heights range from 5' to 7' !

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks  states your character can speak to animals. This should be removed as it goes against our server lore and what we allow, please change this! 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action, it should be written in third person, and it must not include any thoughts in your actions!

You will be given 24 hours to correct the needed changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me! 

 

Whenever you are done or have any questions, feel free to contact me via the forums, my discord [ audyush#7358 ], in-game with /message audyush to find me in-game, or you can also use /creq in-game and myself or my fellow CT members can help you that way!

 If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here!

https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

If you still need help, I would recommend that you read over the Wiki!

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audyush

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Hi! As you can see, your application has unfortunately been denied. Please check below for the detailed reasons why. 

  • Unfortunately, your 24 hour editing period has expired... However, don't fret! You are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change everything that is listed! 

You can submit a new application and try again right after, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below! 

 

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums, my discord [ audyush#7358 ], in-game with /message audyush to find me in-game, or you can also use /creq in-game and myself or my fellow CT members can help you that way!

 

 If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here!

https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

 

Also, I would recommend that you read over the Wiki!

 WIKI


 

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