CumulusKing

• Please try to correct the Spelling & Grammar across your application before you submit any changes (mainly in the roleplay scenario). It doesn’t need to be perfect but it’s best if your application is as easy to read and understand as possible.
• The Halflings are a race of small folk who are similar to the hobbits from Lord of the Rings, not a cross of two races such as half-elf and half-human. The name ‘halfling’ is in reference to their small size rather than to their heritage. Please check out the wiki page on halflings for more information and either change your character’s race or backstory to reflect this. 
• Your character’s Background is a little on the vague side. Please extend this to at least two decent sized paragraphs and expand more on their past. You could include more information on things such as your character’s place of birth, upbringing, family, profession and any other important events that have happened to them.
• You must include at least one valid server Lore Reference in your character biography (other than your character’s race, family, a date or one of the server’s maps). This lore reference could be something like the name of the city your character was born in, the religion they follow or an event such as a war that your character has lived through. Please fix this using the LotC Wiki.
• Unfortunately your character cannot have Steeled their body, as adding metal or artificial parts to your body is a complex form of magic in the server lore and all magical items or knowledge must be obtained in game through roleplay. You will need to change your character’s skin to reflect this. If you’re having trouble finding one, feel free to check out the LotC Skin Archive for use and inspiration!
• You must include at least one clear Flaw in your character’s personality traits/quirks. The fear of being hurt isn’t really a flaw as this is something everyone has and is actually beneficial. Try to emphasise your flaw more. For example, your character might be so afraid of being hurt that he is a coward and will actively seek to place himself out of any situation that has even a small risk of danger.

You have 24 hours to make the edits above. Shoot me a message either here on the forums or on discord (my account is Aqua#5363) once you’ve edited your application. 

Please don’t hesitate to contact me or another Community Team member if you need help or have any questions whatsoever. You can also issue the /creq command on the server to place a ticket should you require assistance.

Feel free to join our New Player Discord! You’ll also find the LotC Wiki helpful when searching for information on the server’s lore.

You have failed to make the required changes within 24 hours.

Please make the changes below in your next application.

• Please try to correct the Spelling & Grammar across your application before you submit any changes (mainly in the roleplay scenario). It doesn’t need to be perfect but it’s best if your application is as easy to read and understand as possible.
• The Halflings are a race of small folk who are similar to the hobbits from Lord of the Rings, not a cross of two races such as half-elf and half-human. The name ‘halfling’ is in reference to their small size rather than to their heritage. Please check out the wiki page on halflings for more information and either change your character’s race or backstory to reflect this. 
• Your character’s Background is a little on the vague side. Please extend this to at least two decent sized paragraphs and expand more on their past. You could include more information on things such as your character’s place of birth, upbringing, family, profession and any other important events that have happened to them.
• You must include at least one valid server Lore Reference in your character biography (other than your character’s race, family, a date or one of the server’s maps). This lore reference could be something like the name of the city your character was born in, the religion they follow or an event such as a war that your character has lived through. Please fix this using the LotC Wiki.
• Unfortunately your character cannot have Steeled their body, as adding metal or artificial parts to your body is a complex form of magic in the server lore and all magical items or knowledge must be obtained in game through roleplay. You will need to change your character’s skin to reflect this. If you’re having trouble finding one, feel free to check out the LotC Skin Archive for use and inspiration!
• You must include at least one clear Flaw in your character’s personality traits/quirks. The fear of being hurt isn’t really a flaw as this is something everyone has and is actually beneficial. Try to emphasise your flaw more. For example, your character might be so afraid of being hurt that he is a coward and will actively seek to place himself out of any situation that has even a small risk of danger.

Please don’t hesitate to contact me or another Community Team member if you need help or have any questions whatsoever, my discord is Aqua#5363. You can also issue the /creq command on the server to place a ticket should you require assistance.

Feel free to join our New Player Discord! You’ll also find the LotC Wiki helpful when searching for information on the server’s lore.

You may reapply at any time.