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Aumen

By Aumen

    • Rules: Yes
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    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Meta gaming is when you use outside knowledge to influence your character in ways they would otherwise not be able to. This includes knowing things that your character shouldn't know and acting on it.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Power gaming is when a character is unrealistically powerful, which is shown in a user dictating their character's actions that should not be allowed. Such as ignoring magic, or even being unrealistically physically and mentally strong.
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.

Aeolyn eyed the clean and well put together man from head to toe as a shiny button reflected into her sparkling blue eye. Her hands subconsciously shifted to her rough sewn in pockets. 

“Maybe a bit of all!” She said with a bright smile. “I wouldn’t mind one bit if you showed me around!” 

Character Name: Aeolyn
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 23
Physical Description: Dyed purple hair, and somewhat raggedy clothing. She's 5'11", while remaining only at 140 lbs. Her eyes are sparkling blue, with a mischievous tint.
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MrMineLoveDude

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  • Your character biography states that you have been apprehended by the Brotherhood of Saint Karl on several occasions, and you then had a rough sketch made of you causing you to flee the city. Please refrain from writing events in your background that can affect other groups already established on the server. You can avoid this by mentioning Aeolyn’s fear of getting caught by the Brotherhood of Saint Karl, but being too scared to even try to steal.
  • Your skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

 

Hey there Aumen! Your application is well written and for the most part done well, with the exception of a few but minor mistakes. However, they can be fixed with a couple of tweaks and you’ll be set for being accepted onto the server! With that, you have 24 hours to make the necessary changes needed. Failing to make these changes within the allotted time will return in an automatic denial, though upon request I’ll be able to grant more time for your corrections.

 

When you are finished, please message me on discord @MrMineLoveDude#1404 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord and reading through the New Player Guide as well.

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MrMineLoveDude

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Unfortunately you’ve failed to meet the needed requirements for your application.

 

Your Application has been denied for the following reason(s):

  • Your character biography states that you have been apprehended by the Brotherhood of Saint Karl on several occasions, and you then had a rough sketch made of you causing you to flee the city. Please refrain from writing events in your background that can affect other groups already established on the server. You can avoid this by mentioning Aeolyn’s fear of getting caught by the Brotherhood of Saint Karl, but being too scared to even try to steal.
  • Your skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

 

Do not fear, this simply means the corrections were not made to the application or were not fully met. After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @MrMineLoveDude#1404, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Guide for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/191596-the-new-player-guide/.

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