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Drum

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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Its like when you have the exam at school and cheat it
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Something unrealistic
    Status: Denied

Oh, hello sir I am only came to buy some supplies and than go again, but thank you for nice welcome.

Character Name: Drum
Character Race: Forest Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: He has green jacket with brown pants, green eyes, red hair and beard. He is quite fat. He has about 70 Kg and he is quite small
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Melpomenne

Changed Status to Under Review

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As you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, but fear not, below I’ve noted why!

 

  • Your Metagaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!

  • Your Powergaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.
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  • Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.

  • Make sure your Character's Aspirations Response  ties into your Character Biography!

  • Make sure your Character Fear Response ties into your character’s personality traits/quirks.

  • Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear and tie into your character’s personality traits.

  • Please make sure to explain what caused your character to develop their fear in your Character Fear Response
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks and one action.

     

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

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Do you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums, or if I’m online, you can message me with /message Melpomenne. 

For a faster reply, add me on discord @ minty#8400

If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the wiki and join the LotC Discord.

 

 

Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed above.
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