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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: DA_SHADOWMAN#3370
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Doing things out of character such as getting a message on skype saying that your base has been blown up by another clan. You get on to stop the raiders this would be metagaming.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Roleplaying overpowered items that are unfair to others. This is done by the player trying to max out his or her character with unusual abilities/powers and or unusual traits
    Status: Denied

"Gud murnin' saw'r."

Ermdram Said as he kept walking through.

"Pla'se exsume mey bu't Oi am'e ver'y besy', an' cen'ot be buther'ed."

"Is there anything you need help finding sir?"

"Noh tank yuw sur."

the dwarf said smiling

"bust bey on'e mey way'e."

the dwarf walked off

Character Name: Ermdram Oakbreaker
Character Race: Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 384
Physical Description: Brown hair, With Pony Tail in the back, Long Beard, Dwarfen Wares, Black Eyes, 3"7' 230LBS.
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LordScisso

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Your application has been put on pending, as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

 

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 
  • In your Physical Description your description and skin do not match up. 
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. Make sure these four are coming from you and not from the man who you encounter in the RP scenario.

 

If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord @LordScisso#5640 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the New Player Discord as well. 

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LordScisso

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Your application has been put on pending, as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

 

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 
  • Your age can not be above 150 years old as a dwarf.

 

If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord @LordScisso#5640 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the New Player Discord as well. 

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LordScisso

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to Time, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

 

  • You did not make all of the necessary edits in the allotted time. Re-apply considering the suggested fixes.

 

After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord @LordScisso#5640, and I recommend you join the New Player Discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/191596-the-new-player-guide/

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