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By Lay

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other website
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Do not use unrealistic advantge?
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Metagaming disrupts fair roleplay by going out of context with the situation. For example knowing information you shouldn't or using something that is out-of-character that disrupts roleplay.
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

Oh i was running away from my father, i am really sad and angry cuz he dont understands me and my life so i thougt i could run away to the forest and never come back, i want to be in the nature and be free.

 

Character Name: Lay
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 16
Physical Description: Its a pretty girl with almond eyes and brown hair and light skin,shes dont weight so much and have a white gold like dress and a gold belt around.
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Changed Status to Under Review

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

-Please make sure to include at least six sentences! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.
 

-Please make sure to mark out what your character is saying with quotation marks, or make sure to make out your actions however you see fit!  
 

-Please make sure to use actions in your backstory/roleplay scenario. This is just to ensure we know what you are doing!

When talking about your character’s actions! Remember to use 3rd person!

-Your Character Age is too young. You must play a character of at least 18 years.

Please make these changes within 48 hours!
Once you have made the changes then message me on Discord @mockingbirdart or on the forums @MockingbirdArt.

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.


Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.

-Please make sure to include at least six sentences! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.
 

-Please make sure to mark out what your character is saying with quotation marks, or make sure to make out your actions however you see fit!  
 

-Please make sure to use actions in your backstory/roleplay scenario. This is just to ensure we know what you are doing!

When talking about your character’s actions! Remember to use 3rd person!

-Your Character Age is too young. You must play a character of at least 18 years.
 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!
If you need help or have any questions, feel free to message me on Discord @mockingbirdart or the forums @MockingbirdArt

 

I recommend joining LOTC's Discord, here is the link! Discord

 

Go to the New Player's category, and go to help chat. Ping @Community team saying "Hello, I got denied, can someone help me with my new application? I'd like to try again!"

 

Here are some Links to also help you out!

WIKI
New Player Hub

 

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