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DaniPala

By DaniPala

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    Discord: DaniPala#3695
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Is when for example you hear something in real life but your character doesnt hear it so you cant use this information
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Is when you do an action in the game that in the real life is imposible
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. You must show an understanding of quoted dialogue and exposition throughout the scenario.

Im here because i want to be the strongest warrior in the world so i come here to find a warrior to fight it

Character Name: Dani
Character Race: Adunian
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: I'm 6 ft . I weight 168 lbs. My eyes are blue and i have black hair I usually wear a blue armor
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Changed Status to Under Review

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory! Think about where they're from, what their parents were like, why they are how they are…?

  • Your Character Biography is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character!

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks must include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a significant fault in their personality. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think about topics such as how they react around new people, or how they view others around them!

  • Your Character Goal must include what drives your character towards that goal instead of just the goal itself!

  • Your Character Goal is a bit lacking!

  • Your Character Fear is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!

  • Your Character Fear must be a fear that is unique to them-- for example, most people are afraid of the dark.

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character!

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [ Vi#3544 ]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message VictoriaMinaj to find me in-game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the WIKI !

♥

 

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