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DerGrufti
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    Discord: 101_vinx
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: spilt the entire situation into more emotes or actions so the rp goes longer
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: its annoying and poeple who dont know about certain events/situations are left behind
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


"Oh, I just, uh…" you stutter, tensing up. You eye the crone, then back outside the tent. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until… you speak up.

 

 

with a smile on your face you start to tell her your story on how you came here.

"i left my Village to improve my Hunting skills, so i went hunting in the dark forest...but when i wanted to get back i didnt found the way i used" your face looks frustrated

"i've wandered around for days without any food...i dont really know where i am but i feel happy that i am not alone any longer." Vitaras Stomach growls.

"could we maybe get something to eat before i continue my tale? i feel like im dying because of my hunger, i feel like i'm starving" he said.


Character Name: vitara Volt
Character Race: Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: likes to wear human clothing
his hair is blonde with a slight tone of red
he weights around 143,3lb
he is 6'1 o
got mint green eyes
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!


 

- Please review our Wiki’s definition of Powergaming. Including an example if you're having a hard time writing something down/or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

You can also learn more about combat roleplay here

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fIJioVePKYo

 

- Please change your character's actions to 3rd person.

 

- Your Skin does not match your physical description. If you need help fixing it, please reach out and I’ll gladly help you! If not please take a look at our skin archive!

https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive



Please make these changes within 48 hours!
Once you have made the changes, message me on Discord @mockingbirdart or on the forums @MockingbirdArt

Feel free to reach out if you need help!

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.


Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.

 

- Please review our Wiki’s definition of Powergaming. Including an example if you're having a hard time writing something down/or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

You can also learn more about combat roleplay here

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fIJioVePKYo

 

- Please change your character's actions to 3rd person.

 

- Your Skin does not match your physical description. If you need help fixing it, please reach out and I’ll gladly help you! If not please take a look at our skin archive!

https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive



If you need help or have any questions, feel free to message me on Discord @mockingbirdart or the forums @MockingbirdArt

 

I recommend joining LOTC's Discord, here is the link! Discord

 

Go to the New Player's category, and go to help chat. Ping @Community team saying "Hello, I got denied, can someone help me with my new application? I'd like to try again!"

 

Here are some Links to also help you out!
 

WIKI

New Player Hub.
 

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