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Destroyer1ox15

By Destroyer1ox15

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-mp.com
    Discord: destroyer1ox15#6724
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: metagaming is basically having your character knowing something that they weren't there to hear
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: power gaming is the art of basically going too op with your character or doing something that your character isn't ale to do
    Status: Denied

*Leo looked at the man through the hood of he cloak*"just traveling trough"*Leo said in a deep serious tone just in case he wasn't going to act like he was a friend*"I'm not going stay long"

Character Name: leo osako
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: Leo is an average height and weight for his species and he looks like he's built like a twig but he is head strong, he has red eyes and black hair
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to be purely personality! Don’t include anything physical or relating to their profession in there. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

  • Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.

  • Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear and tie into your character’s personality traits. Flying is an unlikely fear for anyone in this world to develop considering there's very little ways in which one would've been able to fly at all. Please rethink your fear and tie it into your character's biography and personality.

  • Please make sure to explain what caused your character to develop their fear in your Character Fear Response!

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 


Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Zed#4474]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message _Bueno_ to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! https://discord.gg/lotc

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

 

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