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DemonicHolly666
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    Discord: demonicholly
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Be respectful of the others players as you can be better than them. If you see that kind of behavior in an opposing player, let a moderator/dev know.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: stick to the roleplay... jesus christ.
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


Example: I look into the woman's eyes with anticipation. "My parents threw my brother and I out of our home we were just young. We were lost, didn't know what to do. I of course was the oldest at the time, 12 to be exact. My brother was only 8. I had studied a lot to do with herbs and different types of alcohol, the kind that can help with wounds and other needs of that sort. I have a goal. When I was younger my brother and I were taking into captivity by the orcs. I watched him die. They hacked and sliced at him. They listened to my screams until I couldn't scream anymore. I managed to escape the following night thankfully. Over the years, I've adapted to not having a place to live, though I plan on making that change. The knowledge of spells came around when I was 17, all thanks to an old man I met, he had gray hair and a long beard, never took off his hat and always carried a stick. He trained me until he called me his young mage. It felt great but that never changed what happened to my brother. I will avenge his death and if not, I'll die trying." 

"Oh, I just, uh…" you stutter, tensing up. You eye the crone, then back outside the tent. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until… I stand up and step out of the tent, interlocking my fingers behind my neck and gradually stepping away.


Character Name: Baldor Althonillic
Character Race: Adunian
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: Height: 5'10 Weight: 180Lbs Hair Color: Dark Brown Eye Color: Dark Brown Outfit: Black Overcoat and Black Pants
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

 - How does it make the roleplay environment unfair? Please redo your metagaming question.

 

- Your Roleplay Scenario & Backstory states that you know how to use magic! Please know that you can’t learn how to use magic until you are on the server. If you have any questions please message me! 

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is smol_bean ! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

 

 - How does it make the roleplay environment unfair? Please redo your metagaming question.

 

- Your Roleplay Scenario & Backstory states that you know how to use magic! Please know that you can’t learn how to use magic until you are on the server. If you have any questions please message me! 

 

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is  smol_bean ! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. 

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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