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Zarrix

By Zarrix

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-mp.com
    Discord: jacob2009#0908
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: you can report them
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: I can make you fall out of your role
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))

Example: well i was actully on my way to find a place to settel. when i saw this town i walked around for a few hours and everyone was so nice to me. i saw this tent and thought to take a look inside and now we are here 

"Oh, I just, uh…" you stutter, tensing up. You eye the crone, then back outside the tent. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…

Character Name: Zarrix
Character Race: Cave Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 22
Physical Description: My character is 150 cm it have dark blue eyes weigth about 85 kg have a long beard
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

- Please make sure to include at least six sentences! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.

- Please remember to add dialogue of your character actions! This is to ensure we know what you are doing!

- Your Physical Description needs a bit more detail!  If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good. 

- Please redo your metagaming question as it is not directly what we are looking for, For one how do you personally avoid power gaming yourself? and how can it be un fair to metagame to others not what to do if you come across it.

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is Smol_Bean~#2377! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

 

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

- Please make sure to include at least six sentences! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.

- Please remember to add dialogue of your character actions! This is to ensure we know what you are doing!

- Your Physical Description needs a bit more detail!  If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good. 

- Please redo your metagaming question as it is not directly what we are looking for, For one how do you personally avoid power gaming yourself? and how can it be un fair to metagame to others not what to do if you come across it.

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is Smol_bean~#2377! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. 

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

 

Lastly is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

 

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