DogWithButter

Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

• Your Character Biography states that he grew up in a well off family, You cannot claim to be royalty/nobility/notable/well-known/ too wealthy.
• Your Character Biography states that everyone died in an attack, Must not use a common character trope, including:

1. Parents killed by bandits.
2. Parents killed by orcs.
3. Etc… Please read up more here
4. https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193362-character-tropes-guide/

• Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like

1. https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home

•  Your Roleplay Scenario Response is missing. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. It also needs to be in the 3rd person.

• Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly

  1. https://app.grammarly.com/

  You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

  My discord is Anime_Wolf#0080!

  If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

  If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

  Also here is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

• Your Character Biography states that he grew up in a well off family, You cannot claim to be royalty/nobility/notable/well-known/ too wealthy.
• Your Character Biography states that everyone died in an attack, Must not use a common character trope, including:

1. Parents killed by bandits.
2. Parents killed by orcs.
3. Etc… Please read up more here
4. https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193362-character-tropes-guide/

• Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like

1. https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home

•  Your Roleplay Scenario Response is missing. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. It also needs to be in the 3rd person.

• Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly

  1. https://app.grammarly.com/

   

  Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

   

  My discord is Anime_Wolf#0080! If you have any questions i’m happy to help!