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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: using the internet to be Overpowered in game.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: basically being a creative player on a survival world (metaphorically).
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. You must show an understanding of quoted dialogue and exposition throughout the scenario.

Character Name: Lucius
Character Race: Adunian
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 21
Physical Description: 240ibs. Dark brown hair, Brown eyes, Muscular like john cena, 6ft tall, and looks like the Dúnedain (lotr), or ronan from avengers (hawkeye version)
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Changed Status to Under Review

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This application has been denied at this time. The primary reason is the quality of the overall application does not meet our current standards. In addition...
 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory! Think about where they're from, what their parents were like, why they are how they are…?

  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I suggest adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good. 

  • Your physical description indicates red.blue eyes, this is not compatible with our lore.

  • Your Character Fear is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!

  • Your Character Fear must indicate something other than an experience in ‘hell’, as this is not within our lore.

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 




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