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DullCabbage

DullCabbage

By DullCabbage

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Prior knowledge and information before the creation of one's character. Such as knowing someone's mother's maiden name or name.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Ignoring certain rules and gaining an unfair advantage either in or out of combat. Like becoming the embodiment of Jesus who can cure cancer just by spiting.
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.

 

 

Titus looks at him up and down with a slanted head. And says  "Bug off" as I walk past him. Purposefully hitting the Man in the process. And without missing beat, he try's to find the nearest bar. 

Character Name: Titus Clay
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 32
Physical Description: A tall burly man with a scar on his face. Around 6 '4 and 240. Bald, He wears a Hodgepodge of armor.
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

  • Your meta- and powergaming defintions are headed in the right direction, but I would like you to rewrite them to better fit the context of the server. If you need more information on these terms, visit this page.
  • In your biography, you make mention to a few older events. Unfortunately is far too young to have been a part of the War of Two Emperors. This war took place over 1.5 IRL years ago, which would translate to over 50 IRP. The same for the Andrea Period mention. Both references are allowed, but can not be used in the context of your character having lived through these events.
  • I would like you to make your roleplay scenario a bit longer!

 

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message ColonelMarb1! If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at qɹɐɯ#9406

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

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Statherian

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

- Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed above

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [qɹɐɯ#9406]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message ColonelMarb1 to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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