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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    Discord: IdonthaveitsoiamdoingthisjusttIofillthisout#4566
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Meta gaming is using your knowledge to influence Roleplaying.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Power-Gaming is making you op and immortal.
    Status: Denied

“Shove off”, Said Valker! Valker walked away edgly.


Character Name: Valek
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Tall,And crunchy!
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

  • Your Metagaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!
  1. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be existing settlements, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
    1. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas
    2. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 
    3. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 
  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?
  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good.
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.
  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.
    1. https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action.

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me

My discord is Anime_Wolf#0080!

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

 

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why

 Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below

 

  • Your Metagaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!
  1. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be existing settlements, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
    1. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas
    2. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 
    3. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 
  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?
  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good.
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.
  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.
    1. https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action.

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

 

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