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Eech

Eech

By Eech

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Using outside knowledge to alter an outcome. (ex: Seeing a player playing Minecraft on Discord and going to defend your base because of that information)
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Forcing players to respond to a desired outcome. (ex: Eech blocks Johns attack and chops off his arm in the process)
    Status: Denied

“Greetings and thank you for the warm welcome”, Eech says as he shuffles his feet and adjusts his pack. “I am in search of anyone who may know where Wood Elves tend to reside in these lands”,he asks plainly. “I am looking to study plants and animals here and hope some of them would be interested in trading tales” Eech looks at the man expectantly, hoping for any assistance.

 

(PS My skin was made by my nephew years ago and it means very much to me. I’d like to keep it but if it is impossible to join because of it I understand. )

Character Name: Eech
Character Race: Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 85
Physical Description: An older dwarf with white hair, medium build, green eyes and a short beard.
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Amelica

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Unfortunately, your application has been denied because it had too many errors. Here is some feedback on the aforementioned errors: 

 

  •  Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand.

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! There are many things you can reference including but not limited to existing settlements, wars, and religions. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short; please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Here are some questions you can ask yourself: where are they from? What was their family like? In what situation did they grow up? How did they get where they are today?

  • Your Character Biography states that your character has been reborn multiple times. This is not possible nor is it lore-friendly. Please remove such references.

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks must include at least one noticeably negative trait that will strongly impact your character’s way of life. Anything that can be considered a fault in their personality is acceptable.

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC’s standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you can’t find anything better.

 

You may reapply at any time as long as you correct the mistakes that were pointed out above. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @amelica#8025, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

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