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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    Discord: yung.ghost #8716
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: i put lore and accurately portraying my character above in game progress and achievements
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: unfair advantages, ruins the rp experience
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


"hello there" Tannyil said confused as he sat down.

"im Tannyil Trismenor, you wanna know my story ?, ever since i can remember i was raised by a man named Lathai in a small hut somwhere in norland"

Tannyil stares into the distance.

"i never knew my parents, it´s always been me and Lathai, he teached me me to hunt, use a bow, sword, knife, to make a fire" he said.

"After He died around two years ago i´ve just been wandering around trying to build a new life"

"And earn enough minas to buy a horse" Ha laughed.

"Well, i better get going, its almost night and i still have a long way to go, im trying to reach the kingdom of the borrowlands" he said as he stood up.

"goodbye and farewell, maby we will meet again" Tannyil shook her hand and walked away.

 


Character Name: Tannyil Trismenor
Character Race: Adunian
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: 192 cm (6,3 feet) green eyes, 80 kg, dark blond hair, brown boots and pants, dark green shirt, brown cloak
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

- try to make your rp sample it a little more fluid, please dm me if you need some help.

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is smol_bean! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

- try to make your rp sample it a little more fluid, please dm me if you need some help.

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is  smol_bean ! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. 

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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