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Brakevor
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: To avoid power gaming in roleplay, prioritize collaborative storytelling, encouraging players to work together for a balanced narrative. Clearly establish and enforce rules regarding character abilities and behavior to ensure a fair and enjoyable experience for everyone.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Metagaming disrupts fair roleplay by allowing players to use out-of-character knowledge to influence in-game decisions, undermining the integrity of the narrative and creating an unfair advantage. It diminishes the immersive experience and can lead to an unbalanced and less enjoyable roleplaying environmennt.
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


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"Oh, I just, uh…" you stutter, tensing up. You eye the crone, then back outside the tent. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…


Character Name: Brakevor
Character Race: Orc
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: Brakevor, the Orc, stands at an imposing 7 feet tall, with a robust and muscular build. He has olive-green skin bears scars from battles past.
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!


 

-It looks like you left the original prompt, please make sure to put your own story down and remove the example text! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about parents? Ect.

-Remember to write your narrative in 3rd person.

 

-It looks like you don’t have a skin!  Might we be able to interest you in a skin from our skin archive? 

https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive



Please make these changes within 48 hours!
Once you have made the changes, message me on Discord @mockingbirdart or on the forums @MockingbirdArt

Feel free to reach out if you need help!

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.


Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.

 

-It looks like you left the original prompt, please make sure to put your own story down and remove the example text! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about parents? Ect.

-Remember to write your narrative in 3rd person.

 

-It looks like you don’t have a skin!  Might we be able to interest you in a skin from our skin archive? 

https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive



If you need help or have any questions, feel free to message me on Discord @mockingbirdart or the forums @MockingbirdArt

 

I recommend joining LOTC's Discord, here is the link! Discord

 

Go to the New Player's category, and go to help chat. Ping @Community team saying "Hello, I got denied, can someone help me with my new application? I'd like to try again!"

 

Here are some Links to also help you out!
 

WIKI

New Player Hub.

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