Firedrake20

Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

• Your Powergaming Definition is incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definition and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!
  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
• Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas
  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris
  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 
  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 
    • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory! Think about where they're from, what their parents were like, why they are how they are…?
• Your Character Fear is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure its atleast two sentences!
• Your Character Like is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure its atleast two sentences!
• Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.
  • https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive/home?authuser=0
• Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character!
• Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 
• https://app.grammarly.com/

After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @Chronics#7490, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/