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Fireflylord

By Fireflylord

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    Discord: JoJoJo#2613
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: When you dont discover something in character and use that for roleplaying
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: When you do something thats unfair, like being a god or something, and doing something out of character
    Status: Denied

"Adventure, in hopes I can avenge my fallen my family"

Character Name: Aether Rhetris
Character Race: Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 52
Physical Description: A tall man, long brown hair with blue eyes, a strong man but flexible
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Melpomenne

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Character Biography features a common character trope! Please change that.

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality.

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

  • Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear and tie into your character’s personality traits.
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one action. Please make sure to add one!

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [minty#8400]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message Melpomenne to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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