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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server-list.com
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Instantly knowing everything about something
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: absurd and unrealistic attributes e.g. being perfect at everything
    Status: Denied

I would respond with:

‘Ah well i’m here for work matters’

Character Name: Wilbur Creek
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 22
Physical Description: leather shirt, gloves, grey trousers, leather cap, boots and a water skin on his back. blue eyes. brown hair. medium-strength, quick. 5ft9, 160 pounds
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Amelica

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Unfortunately, your application has been denied because it had too many errors. Here is some feedback on the aforementioned errors: 

 

  •  Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand.

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! There are many things you can reference including but not limited to existing settlements, wars, and religions. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short; please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Here are some questions you can ask yourself: where are they from? What was their family like? In what situation did they grow up? How did they get where they are today?

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks must be purely personality; don’t include anything that references your character’s physical disposition.

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you can’t figure out what more to add, here are some questions you can ask yourself: what is your character afraid of? How do they act around strangers? What is their resting disposition?
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one dialogue and one action. 

 

You may reapply at any time as long as you correct the mistakes that were pointed out above. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @amelica#8025, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

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