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Haruki Zennin

By Haruki Zennin

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: FluxZen#2233
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Its using knowledge you have gained outside of rp that you use inside of rp
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Someone who gives themselves and unfair advantage by making themselves invincible or overpowered
    Status: Denied

He steps off the boat timidly thinking he might throw up. "don't you just hate boats? they make me so sick" he states "anyway think you could show me around? I saw this place on the map but I don't know any residents here" he proclaims. The kind man nods and leads him through the bazaar, Haruki stares in awe at all the stores. He looks to the kind man and says "you asked what I came here for right? I came to seek out adventures and maybe a bit of cash but, above all I want to become a hero that people will write about for centuries!"

Character Name: Haruki Zennin
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: Average body type (still working out), Hazel eyes, 5'9, 130 lbs, Short light brown hair
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KaiserJacobII

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

 

→ Your Powergaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

 

→ Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

 

→ Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I suggest adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good.

 

→ Your Personality Traits/Quirks must include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a significant fault in their personality.

 

→ Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think about topics such as how they react around new people, or how they view others around them!

 

→ Your Character Fear is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!

 

→ Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!

 

After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord Kaiser Jacob II#1965. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX

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