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FoxyLoot

By FoxyLoot

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Using my irl skills and knowledge to figure out my characters next move.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Making your character ass strong as possible in one category.
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.

"Well thanks!" I respond. "I'm here for adventure and a some fun!" I walk away and begin browsing the various shops that rack the streets. I go up to a food shop and look at a pouch with some money. I decide to buy some food as well as look at the bazaar. I see all the cool items but realize the price, then I walk away.

Character Name: Royal Kill
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: Scrappy attire, plain clothing, amber colored eyes, light brown hair, not scrawny but not built up, in the middle, weight: light but not too light.
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Statherian

Changed Status to Under Review

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

  • Both your meta- and powergaming definitions are not quite what I'm looking for yet. Please visit this link for information on the server used definitions. Once you have done such, rephrase the current definitions in your application and also include an example of how each term is applied in game.

  • In your biography you mention that your character was born in Senntisten. Unfortunately Senntisten is an old settlement, which was located in an old realm, Atlas. Due to your character's age, he would have been born in Arcas instead.

  • Make sure the actions in your roleplay scenario are written in third person, and not in first!

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message DelfShadowLeader! If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at qɹɐɯ#9406

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

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Statherian

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

- Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed above

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [qɹɐɯ#9406]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message DelfShadowLeader to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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