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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    Discord: fiskus#2121
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: I try to be realistic because i'm really into stories and stuff so tend to stray away from very ambitious projects. I also don't have enough time nor am dedicated enough to be that grindy.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: It makes logical holes that disrupt a coherent story, and is also pretty scummy.
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


Example:


"Oh, I just, uh…" you stutter, tensing up. You eye the crone, then back outside the tent. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…

sigh, I've never really had family, the kind your related too at least. I'm from a desolate, northern, land, where people would fight each other for the minimal necessities one needs to survive. But I left, I adventured south to escape this cycle of violence. I don't want to survive if there's nothing to fight for... I forged a comrade in Try Wood, who showed me kindness at my darkest hour of my travels. Ever sense I've loyally stuck with him, on all his travels. I hope to find myself in this overwhelming tornado, and let the winds guide me to purpose. My lute begins to slip form my bag, I dance around my thumbs for 10 seconds, staring deeply into the gaps in my hand. I'm battling with the water attempting to flood from my eyes before hastily getting up and leaving the room, ignoring the hag's calls of for me to elaborate.

 

(sorry about the font I copied it from my discord dm's sense I was setting up and had it in there with my friend and my i had to redo my application, I tried to fix it but its still wonky.)


Character Name: Akseli Halberd
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: 5'10, bard attire, bluish-grey eyes, brown hair, 145lbs, midly lean/skinny fit, pale, strong jaw, hugeee eye bags.
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

  • Please review our Wiki’s definition of Powergaming. Including an example if you're having a hard time writing something down/or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out.
  1. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
  • You can also learn more about combat roleplay here
  1. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fIJioVePKYo
  • Please remember to include backstory in the Actions to your Roleplay Scenario & Backstory! Even if your persona doesn’t talk about it
  • Your Physical Description needs a bit more detail!  If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good.

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is Anime_Wolf#0080! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums @AnimeWolf0080!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “I’m new and would like some help with my application. I got put on pending!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

  • Please review our Wiki’s definition of Powergaming. Including an example if you're having a hard time writing something down/or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out.
  1. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
  • You can also learn more about combat roleplay here
  1. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fIJioVePKYo
  • Please remember to include backstory in the Actions to your Roleplay Scenario & Backstory! Even if your persona doesn’t talk about it
  • Your Physical Description needs a bit more detail!  If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good.

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

My discord is Anime_Wolf#0080! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums @AnimeWolf0080

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “Hello, I got denied, can someone help me with my new application! I’d like to try again!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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