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By Frogo

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    Discord: Frogo#6342
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Playing in character
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Play/Carrying out an action you your favor
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. You must show an understanding of quoted dialogue and exposition throughout the scenario.

 

"No none of that i am just a humble elf making his way across this big world"

Character Name: Condoor
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 23
Physical Description: Long white hair, tall, baby blue eyes, light weight, very fast running
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

To many errors you also had powergaming in your bio

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help
  1. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  1. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

  2. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris

  3. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Character Biography states that his village was raided and killed by Orcs. This is a common character trope, please read up more here

  1. https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193362-character-tropes-guide/

  • Your Character Biography states that he killed a village of Orcs at the age of 15 this counts as power gaming. Please look at our wiki's definition of Powergaming

  1. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

  • Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography

  • Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear.

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action, your action must be in the 3rd person.

  • Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please fix one!

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly.

  1. https://app.grammarly.com/

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is Anime_Wolf#0080! If you have any questions i’m happy to help!

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here are the links! 

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