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dweeble

By dweeble

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    Discord: gerome1#3966
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: metagaming is when you look or research something to get intell even though you know its not a
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: i do not know
    Status: Denied

dweeble would say that he likes shinys and woulkd like to get rich

Character Name: dweeble
Character Race: Goblin
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 27
Physical Description: has several scars on his face from betraying soemone and geting slashed with a daggar
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Fionn__TWG

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to multiple reasons, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!
  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory! Think about where they're from, what their parents were like, why they are how they are…?
  • Your Character Biography is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character!
  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I suggest adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good.
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think about topics such as how they react around new people, or how they view others around them!
  • Your Character Goal must include what drives your character towards that goal instead of just the goal itself!
  • Your Character Goal is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!
  • Your Character Fear is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!
  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.
  • Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please fix this accordingly!


After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @FionnTWG#3845, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite:

https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help:

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

 

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