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Geyprida

By Geyprida

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server-list.com
    Discord: PastelToaster#6147
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: This is a term for rpg games
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Power gaming is another term for being Over powered.
    Status: Denied

I jump due to the gentlemen appearing almost out of no where, trying to get my balance back making sure i don’t fall into the water. “oh why Hello, thanks, i uh have business here to tend to” i responded being a little suspicious at him, wondering to myself where he came from and was he waiting for me to be here. “Im sorry but whats your name sir?” i asked out of curiosity, slowly moving my hand to the side of my hip which is where i put my battle axe at out of pure caution.  (the skin btw is the only good skin that was somewhat like the description)

Character Name: Athdara Thorne
Character Race: Orc
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Attire: mainly leather but shows alot of skin. Eye: royal blue. hair: red/orange. body: hourglass/pear. Height: 5'11. Weight: 150. Scars: yes,on arms
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MrMineLoveDude

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  • Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand! 
  • Your character biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be existing settlements, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
  • Your character biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?
  • Your character biography states that your friends and family were killed by bandits. You must not use a common character trope, including: parents killed by bandits or parents killed by orcs.

 

Hey there Geyprida! Your application is well written and for the most part done well, with the exception of a few but minor mistakes. However, they can be fixed with a couple of tweaks and you’ll be set for being accepted onto the server! With that, you have 24 hours to make the necessary changes needed. Failing to make these changes within the allotted time will return in an automatic denial, though upon request I’ll be able to grant more time for your corrections.

 

When you are finished, please message me on discord @MrMineLoveDude#1404 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord and reading through the New Player Guide as well.

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MrMineLoveDude

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Unfortunately you’ve failed to meet the needed requirements for your application.

 

Your Application has been denied for the following reason(s): 

  • Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand! 
  • Your character biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be existing settlements, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
  • Your character biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?
  • Your character biography states that your friends and family were killed by bandits. You must not use a common character trope, including: parents killed by bandits or parents killed by orcs.

 

Do not fear, this simply means the corrections were not made to the application or were not fully met. After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @MrMineLoveDude#1404, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Guide for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/191596-the-new-player-guide/.

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