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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: PC Gamer
    Discord: LastKing2X#3030
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Use another place, such as Discord, to talk about the game server
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Use powers that should not be used anywhere
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. You must show an understanding of quoted dialogue and exposition throughout the scenario.

Character Name: sherikano
Character Race: Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 1265
Physical Description: black eyes and black hair , im a skeleton , 195 cm , 45 cm , I can give life to the dead
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to being a meme application, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

 

  • Your Metagaming Definition is incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definition and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!
  • Your Powergaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!
  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory! Think about where they're from, what their parents were like, why they are how they are…?
  • Your Character Biography is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character!
  • Your Character Biography states that you are a devil who killed betrayal. This is not allowed.
  • Your Character Age is too old. You must play a character of below 100 years!
  • Your Physical Description states that your character is a skeleton. This conflicts with your character's race and is not allowed.
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks must include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a significant fault in their personality. 
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think about topics such as how they react around new people, or how they view others around them!
  • Your Character Goal states 'a big fire dog'. This is not a goal.
  • Your Character Fear is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is blank.


After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @FionnTWG#3845, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite:

Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help:

 

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