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By Jorba05

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    Discord: Glorious Leader#5114
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Using info that your character does not know to their advantage
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Making a character do things that they could't do in a "real" scenario, for example a goblin killing a drake in a single blow
    Status: Denied

who is this weird man? Hik thinks, why should he get to know my secrets?  “that is none of your business! now go away!” he says *he then tries push him aside but fails*  Hik then quickly runs away from the annoying man and looks for some place to get some well deserved rest.

Character Name: Hik Backstabba
Character Race: Goblin
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 22
Physical Description: ~120 cm (4 feet) tall, weighs about 27 kg ( 60 lbs), Has bright green skin, a very long nose and bright red eyes. He wears black-ish rags,
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Amelica

Changed Status to Under Review

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Unfortunately, your application has been denied because it had too many errors. Here is some feedback on the aforementioned errors: 

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand.

  •  Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! There are many things you can reference including but not limited to existing settlements, wars, and religions. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short; please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Here are some questions you can ask yourself: where are they from? What was their family like? In what situation did they grow up? How did they get where they are today?
  • Your Skin is not up to LotC’s standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you can’t find anything better.

  • Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please find one that matches. Alternatively, you may correct your physical description so it matches the skin you use.

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application; I am having a difficult time understanding parts of it. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

You may reapply at any time as long as you correct the mistakes that were pointed out above. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @amelica#8025, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

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